Today I want to edit a poem I wrote a few months ago. The poem itself works, for me anyway, but it looks very weak on the page. The last stanza (5th) tapers off into shorter lines, when really the poem is getting stronger. I hope I can improve the look on the page, without messing up the poem. I'm going to bring out pencil and paper to start with, as I like the tactile contact, the feel of the pencil, the movement on the paper...
Another belated first today...I joined Facebook, and am now busy trying to make sure nobody can find me...neurotic or what?
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